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Date Posted: 20:12:02 03/14/03 Fri
Author: Khaos-Da lyrical Immauel
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educAtion clAss for thAt Azz-just my thoughts let me know if u feel me

Be thankful for who u are our identity is God’s exact/
It’s a national fact/
That black females try to be white, while white females try to be black/
We bleach our skin to make it whiter, while the white want to get dark so they tan/
It’s just a physical form of death not realize from man/
Columbus made people think the world was flat and/
If u traveled a distance in expand/
Across the major bodies of water you’ll fall off land/
So in that case man...that let’s u know the system is full of manipulation/
Underneath the basics/ is a hate organization/
George Bush’s people probably spit in Saddam’s people faces/
And gave other places/ a reason to terrorize our nation/
We already 60 years’ advance/ technology has already taking jobs in our plants/
Technology taking over mankind is what’s next/
We created holidays like the fourth of July to symbolize our Freedom of Independence/
Most of my niggas not FREE they sentence/
For crimes they never committed/
I figure when America sees a nigga gaining power they want to cease it/
Take a look at the powerful black leaders/
Like Martin Luther King Jr. And Malcolm X and look at the outcome of
These individuals if you don’t believe me/

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This was decent, but that columbus line really bothered me cuz of how innacurate it was.. Columbus had nothing to do with proving the earth was flat OR round.. Copernicus was the one that proved the earth was round.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 20:22:12 03/14/03 Fri
The topic was generic in some way.. just felt played as I read it.. try to be more clever dont just write down the first thought that pops up, challenge that very first thought.. writing is all about conveying a message and having that message be appealing to the reader.. in more ways then one.. dont limit your self to a program.. release your self in your text let your words breathe and take life. ONE! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:21:53 03/15/03 Sat

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