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Date Posted: 19:17:56 01/15/03 Wed
Author: starks (the mouth of madnes)
Author Host/IP: cpe-68-118-252-240.ma.charter.com / 68.118.252.240
Subject: PEEP The art of spitting aka making it look easy

my mics a handgun cocked and fully loaded
spit clips at random got you to shocked to even notice
dropped the ransom for obnoxius decieving poets
copped a mansion where their locked to the seats on toilets
you can't stop the phantom i've already decided to destroy it
watched them cough for a moment and told em it was hopless
filled the bowl deep wit corrosive explosives and within a breath i lit it
is his skin boiling yet? i don't know best thing now is to forget it
blessed with the sickness of depicted written lyrics
stricken with a mind that opens up for all sitting near it
listen while i clear it up to a more understandable form
i was sent here to explore and battle cats through text wars
whats in the next door no more than questionable mc
resembling what i once was now i wrestle em with speech
in the middle of street is where i sought to bring it farther
another absent minded toddler spoke directly to his father
i responded with a light hug and explained that life only gets harder
but through hip hop and family no one can end the dynasty so they need not even bother
to even believe something this deep you'd need another seven years
and even heavens prayers wouldn't prepare you for the terror that i bare
so if you care for your safety let the beast consume his feast
at least give me ten feet far enough for me to release this heat

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"filled the bowl deep wit corrosive explosives and within a breath i lit it" this was the illest line I saw based on the multi's and near perfect flow, the rest of the rhyme sorta switched between realy dope flow and a couple bars that threw it off, sylibles are important, but all in all the imagery and the multi's made this a good read... (NT) -- Souliberty, 06:37:30 01/16/03 Thu
good rhymes. but just didnt get into it (NT) -- Tactics, 13:20:14 01/16/03 Thu
my mouths on fire, ill shit, that corrosive line stuck out to me too, nice post, no downers here, Keep On (NT) -- Grotesque, 13:38:08 01/16/03 Thu
yeah one or two nice lines...bullshit flow, no offence kidd but your lines are too long,..it hits nice on that already mentioned line and also the "dipicted written lyrics" line was tight...fix the flow and it's dope...peace (NT) -- MikMaQ, 06:06:39 01/17/03 Fri

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