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Date Posted: 00:34:46 02/24/08 Sun
Author: gOthgiRL†
Subject: MCGEE MYSTERY !!!!!!! I've been thinking since there aren't any new episodes for now and I am extremely bored, that we should start a thing I like to call " McGee Mystery!! " It's like the thing they used to do on the JAG board with the round robin thing. So this is how It should go. Anyone can start a story but they have to set their own rules to the story. I'm gonna say that this story has to go alphabetically. So for example the first Sentence has to start with an A then the next with a B a C and so on through the alphabet. And everyone adds their own sentence to make the story complete until you get to z! I'll Start

Abby rushes into the lab and is shocked to find............. now someone has to start a sentence with the letter B and continue the story!! YAy!

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[> bertie is missing from his home, in the lab, so she screams in disbelief -- smartie, 10:35:08 02/24/08 Sun [1]


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[> [> Ucky's Forename -- Roger Jones, 02:01:24 03/17/08 Mon [1]

Whats Duckies first or forename?

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[> Call Gibbs! She says frantically to McGee. We have to find Bertie. This cannot be happening! she says in disbelief..... I'M not calling Gibbs, YOU call Gibbs Abby! McGee says. FINE!! ......next time you need something McGee I just might not be here to help! Abby says -- gOthgiRL†, 22:35:00 02/24/08 Sun [1]


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[> Dagnabit! Abby, Gibbs is not interested in a woman who amuses herself with parrots, and then finds one gone! Be serious. Let's look for the top number one villian today.....Angus McGuyver!! -- Frances (The parrot line came from an old, old movie & I thought it weird then....), 04:30:19 02/26/08 Tue [1]


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[> Everybody pulled out the the Edinburgh phone books and started call people named Angus. Meanwhile McGyver had hidden himself away on P2X339 with his old flame Sam Carter -- Lady C, 19:18:36 02/27/08 Wed [1]


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[> Forget What u'r doing everybody!! says Gibbs rushing into the lab. We have a murder that just came in ! Capt. Cartwright was murdered on the USS Liberty this morning. " " Do we have any leads boss? " asks Dinnozzo. "No leads. Nothing. The director is sending us to sea ASAP to investigate before this thing gets outta hand." says Gibbs. " Pack u'r bags we head out in an hour " says gibbs as he walks out of the lab in a hurry. " Looks like we're goin safari!! " says Dinnozzo with a devious smile on his face. " C'mon probie we gotta go! " McGee gives Abby a sarcastic look of " Here we go, this should be fun!" and follows Dinnozzo out, leaving Abby in the lab to find Bertie by herself. -- gOthgiRL†, 22:16:56 02/29/08 Fri [1]


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[> [> Knocked down by the explosion McGee fell on top of Tony who made a movie referenced remark. Gibbs pulled them both up by their collars and said... -- TV Junkie Mom, 20:02:44 03/09/08 Sun [1]


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[> Gibbs, being the first off the helo, looks around and sees Captain McGonagle coming toward them. After introductions all around, the Captain takes them for a briefing of what has happened... -- shippermom, 08:34:16 03/04/08 Tue [1]


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[> [> Hoedingle was murdered I'm positive of that. said the Captain. He had been seen dancing a hula in the galley and the Achy Breaky in the sick bay. Problem is there was no music playing at the time -- TV Junkie Mom, 20:07:28 03/07/08 Fri [1]


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[> " I need you to bring everyone who saw Capt Cartwright in the galley and in sick bay prior to his death, to the situation room ." Gibbs tells Tony and Ziva. "Mcgee you and Ducky are with me! " " yes boss." McGee responds. Tony and Ziva are kinda just standing around " Let's get to it !" Gibbs says with a raised voice, cleary irritated! Gibbs Mcgee and Ducky head off in the opposite direction from Tony and Ziva. Dinozzo turns to Ziva and says, " Geesh, You'd think someone was murded!" Ziva gives Tony a deserving dirty look. " What!" Dinnozo shrugs. They head off to gather the potential witness' for Gibbs. . -- gOthgiRL†, 01:26:36 03/08/08 Sat [1]


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[> Just then an explosion rocks the ship and alarm bells go off. Everyone is scrambling around and suddenly the lights go out..... -- shippermom, 12:56:04 03/08/08 Sat [1]


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[> [> Knocked down by the explosion McGee fell on top of Tony who made a movie referenced remark. Gibbs pulled them both up by their collars and said... -- TV Junkie Mom..it ended up in the wrong place!, 20:06:21 03/09/08 Sun [1]


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[> " Look for Ducky!" Gibbs says to Dinnozzo and McGee. " What ? " McGee says unable to hear over the deafening alarms. " Ducky Dammit, Look for him! He was right behind me before the blast and now he's gone ! Find Him Now!!! " Looking behind Gibbs, the corridor is filled with nothing but smoke. Tony and McGee begin looking for Ducky unable to see where the smoke begins or ends. " Ducky!" They begin to yell as they slowly stumble through the smoke. " Ducky Where are you ? " McGee yells as loud as he can. " I'm over here lads!" A faint voice says in the distance. " I'm stuck under a pipe that has broken loose!" Ducky says straining as he tries to push the pipe from his leg. Tony kneels down to Ducky trying to aid in the removal of the pipe. " Don't move Ducky! " Dinnozzo says fearing the pipe may have broken Ducky's Leg. Tony orders McGee, "Go get Gibbs and tell him we found Ducky and he's stuck and find a medic." -- gOthgiRL†, 00:44:16 03/10/08 Mon [1]


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[> McGee finds Gibbs and tells him of Ducky's situation and then is off to find the medic. Passing an intercom phone in the hallway, he announces that a medic is needed immediatlely in Ducky's location. Turning, McGee sees a dark shadow at the end of the hall slowly hauling a large bulky form into a room..... -- shippermom, 12:11:49 03/10/08 Mon [1]


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[> " No it can't be!" McGee says to himself, " Is that Capt. Cartwright? But he's supposed to be DEAD!?!?" Debating which to do first; follow the man hauling a mysterious form or get the medic and help Ducky, McGee runs towards the man. As the man disappears into the darkness McGee turns back unsure what will happen if he finds Capt. Cartwright alive and if he continues on by himself, the others unaware he is chasing what is supposed to be a dead man. As he runs back towards the group he can't help but wonder what he would have found had he continued the pursuit. -- gOthgiRL†, 15:23:41 03/10/08 Mon [1]


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[> "Oh no," McGee says as Ducky is airlifted off of the ship and is rushed to the hospital for emergency surgery on his leg. "How bad is it?" he asks Gibbs as he turns to face McGee. "Not so good," answerd Gibbs. "You aren't going to believe what I just saw down the hall," "I swear I just saw Captain Cartwright," With a smack to the back of the head, Gibbs asks McGee why he didn't follow him? "Well what are you waiting for, show us where you saw him." -- shippermom, 07:04:01 03/11/08 Tue [1]


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[> "Past the main corridor, just up ahead."McGee explains as Gibbs,Tony&Ziva all proceed through the slighty smoke filled corridor."I saw what appeared to be Cpt Cartwright just over there. He was dragging something bulky! I couldn't make out what it was,.. sorry boss!" " No McGee, you did good!" Gibbs reassures McGee, like you would a 13 year old for giving their best effort."Ouch!" Ziva says as they pass a darkened room."I just hit somethin with my boot!" she says surprised; anticipating the source of her discomfort. "That really hurt!"she says quietly under her breath but just loud enough that Tony hears her." Imagine how the boot feels Ziva!"Tony remarks. "The Boot! The Boot, Tony!...I'll show u how THE BOOT FEELS!" she says,clearly flustered."Quiet! " Gibbs says agitated, "If you two would shut up for one second, maybe you would've heard that!" " Heard what ?" Tony mumbles to himself. Gibbs walks slowly surveying the area for the sound he heard during all the commotion. -- gOthgiRL ( uuuuggggghhhh this keyboard doesn't have num lock for my cross symbol!!), 01:32:39 03/12/08 Wed [1]


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[> "Quiet!" Gibbs reminds everyone again. Soon after, they all heard a bump and a scraping sound from across the room. Turning on his flashlight and shining it quickly in the direction of the noise, Gibbs sees what appears to be Captain Cartwright dragging the limp body of... you guessed it, Captain Cartwright. "Stop right there!!" shouts Gibbs as he motions the others to move in and subdue the concious Captain..... -- shippermom, 11:01:56 03/12/08 Wed [1]


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[> Reaching for his gun, Gibbs yells once again " Stop right there! Don't even think about moving; I'll shoot with no hesitation! " As Capt Cartwright is frozen like a deer in headlights or should I say flashlights, Tony and Ziva move in toward him, guns pointed at his head. " McGee check his pockets." Gibbs orders. McGee checks Capt Cartwright's pockets pulling out various objects placing them on the table in the room. Tony and Ziva subdue Capt Cartwright and tie him to a chair next to the table using cords from multiple electronic appliances stored in the room. " Do you want to tell me who you are? " Gibbs' questions Capt Cartwright while examining the various objects McGee placed on the table, his attention being drawn back and forth between the table and the corner of the room where the dead body of another apparent Capt Cartwright lays. Gibbs begins to examine the dead body as The Tied up Capt Cartwright remains speechless. -- gOthgiRL†, 00:52:33 03/13/08 Thu [1]


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[> [> Hey, G girl, looks like we are the only ones working this story. ; ) -- shippermom, 13:51:47 03/13/08 Thu [1]


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[> [> [> That's OK... I'm bored and it's been fun doing this. I'm happy at least a few people joined in. Hopefully others might be reading it if they aren't posting. -- gOthgiRL†, 16:15:06 03/14/08 Fri [1]


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[> "So, what intel do we have on the situation?' asked Gibbs. "Working on it boss," was said in unison as the three were searching frantically on their computers. "Well, work harder, we need something before we interrogate him!" gruffed Gibbs. "Boss, I have something on an officer Areli Shachar who was being watched for activity regarding the US Fleets," said Tony. "Wait! I have just uncovered papers on the USS Liberty in the lining of the coat we took from our suspect," said Ziva..... -- shippermom, 10:35:08 03/15/08 Sat [1]


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[> Tony grabs the paper from Ziva's hand before she can read off the printed words."Boss, it says here that THE SHIPMENT is ready and further instructions are required in order to proceed!" Tony looks at the paper, flipping it over for any more clues as to it's origin. " What kind of shipment?" McGee asks."Doesn't say!"Tony answers McGee."Of course it doesn't say! You wouldn't write a cryptic message and send the decoder with it too, would you!"Gibbs' says irritated by the comment "Numbskulls!" Silence overcomes the room as Gibb's paces quietly thinking. McGee flinches as Gibb's burst out words quicker than expected,"Alright, we're leaving here! McGee grab all the contents from the table and get them ready, we're heading back home!" " But what about the suspect? I can make him talk!" Ziva says waiting, like a lion stalking it's prey. " We don't have time here. He'll come back with us." says Gibbs. Ziva backing down slowly, adrenaline still coursing her veins. -- gOthgiRL† Sorry I haven't posted in a while been busy. ( I wish this would let me write more than 1000 letters in the message subject box!!), 00:27:44 04/01/08 Tue [1]


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[> Under strict instruction they load everything into the helo and then turn to see Gibbs escorting their suspect towards them. The flight back is quiet and uneventful but when they land, all Hell breaks loose. Black SUVs surround the helo and guns start blasting. Everyone hits the floor to take cover and avoid the bullets that are piercing the sides of the helo. All of the sudden a single bullet flies through the side and hits the suspect in the head........ -- shippermom, 13:04:56 04/02/08 Wed [1]


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[> Valuing the teams lives more than ever now that the suspect is dead slumped on Gibb's lap, blood flowing on the floor of the helo , Gibbs orders the pilot," Get this thing in the air now, before we're all dead!" The Helo takes off as bullets ricochet its outer panels. As they gain altitude and reach a safe distance Gibbs says, " What the Hell is going on?!" " I was just going to ask that question!" Tony says. " Sir ?" says the pilot, " Waiting for your orders, Sir! " Knowing they are low on fuel and the helo having not been equiped with ammunition to fire back, Gibb's orders the pilot to find an alternate landing site. Meanwhile Gibb's contacts Director Shepard to inform her of the situation and asks for immediate assistance. -- gOthgiRL†, 00:14:26 04/08/08 Tue [1]


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[> "What the hell is going on Gibbs?" the director wanted to know. "We were ambushed and our guy is dead," Gibbs told her. "You will be landing at an undisclosed ;ocation and from there you will get your instructions. I don't want to chance any leaks." As the helo landed, the team was rushed into SUV's and whisked away to meet the director. With a look of relief on her face, Director Shepard waited in the doorway until she could usher the team into her office. Not knowing exactly what to say with emotions running wild, the director just stared out at the team. -- shippermom, 10:23:16 04/09/08 Wed [1]


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[> " Xanthene Dye!" Abby Blurted as she stormed through the directors office, with papers in her hand containing test results. " It was taken from the suspects clothes!" " What does that mean Abby?" Director Shepard asks. " Well, it's a special dye that creates colors ranging from flourescent yellow to pink to bluish red." " So what does it mean, Abby? " Gibbs asks with the utmost patience. " That I haven't quite figured out yet...." Gibbs begins to interupt Abby but is halted as She cuts him off. ".....BUT this type of dye was sold only from 1 manufacturer!....If that helps" " Gibbs', What would our suspect be using dye for?" Ziva asks. " Let's go find out!" Gibbs' says as he leaves the office motioning everyone to follow him. -- gOthgiRL†, 23:10:24 04/13/08 Sun [1]


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[> "You aren't going to believe this," said Ducky as they entered autopsy. "What is it?' asked Gibbs. "The Xanthene dye was transfered to our man's clothes from boxes that were being transported on the USS Liberty," "Tony go find out what was in those boxes!" Gibbs barked. "Go help him McGee!" As their fingers tapped computer keys, answers were filling in the blanks. Soon they were back in autopsy and filling everyone in. " The boxes contained rocket launchers that Captain Cartwright was transporting and our man infiltrated the ship and was trying to steal them. He had a latex mask on and was fooling everyone until he entered the chow hall and came facce to face with himself." "His name was Areli Shacher, he was on the watch list and for good reason.".......... -- shippermom, 15:13:35 04/15/08 Tue [1]


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[> " Zero tolerance!" Director Shepard interjects as she cuts off Ducky. " Yes, my dear and so it should be with people who commit such heinous of crimes!" says Ducky as he looks into the eyes of the genuine Capt Cartwright's corpse with sympathy. " Areli Shacher was on our top most wanted list, not because of what he may do but because of what he has done already. He is wanted for the intricate planning of unimaginable crimes and execution of some of those plans." Explains Director Shepard. " What were those crimes, Jen?" Gibbs' asks, knowing quite well the answer she will give. " You already know this Jethro, you aren't cleared for this information. Not today; Not tomorrow !" " Well, I thought I'd give it a try, you never know!" Gibbs' says with a smirk as if to allure and provoke Director Shepard, like old times, only she and him would understand. -- gOthgiRL†, 01:35:34 04/16/08 Wed [1]


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[> What a story! I have never seen one of these actually make it to the end. It definitely was a challenge to be creative enough to keep the story interesting. Great job to gOthgiRL and those of you who participated and made it fun. -- shippermom, 16:53:04 04/16/08 Wed [1]


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[> [> Letters X and Z were really hard to start a sentence with! LOL. This was fun. Shippermom u gave me a lot of ideas to work with! THanks for playing all the way through with me!! I wouldn't mind making a new one in the near future! -- gOthgiRL†, 17:50:33 04/16/08 Wed [1]


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