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Date Posted: 13:29:56 03/24/10 Wed
Author: Pretty Girl
Subject: Re: Cow Girl's stomach destruction(Fiction)
In reply to: D-Rock 's message, "Cow Girl's stomach destruction(Fiction)" on 04:49:56 02/27/10 Sat

Sometimes I think I'm crazy for thinking about the things that happen in my stories. A lot of my thoughts come from fights that I've seen but most are from my own fights. I also sometimes think about how I want to be beaten up if I suspect it is going to happen. Like I said earlier, I don't want my teeth knocked out,my nose broken or any damage to my face. I'd rather be punched MOST anywhere else. D R u and other reader / writers also know as well as I do that only so many different words and grunting insignias can be used when telling a story. Maybe some of u who are smarter can give better descriptions but I do what I can. I understand that I could probably use more words but I just say what comes to mind. You use several repeat words in your stories D R and I don't contradict. I just enjoy your story. Pretty Girl is 5'7" tall with shoulder length straight hair (brunette). She has green eyes, canteloupe sized breasts and a cute small,round,innie bellybutton. Her stomach is soft but not pudgy. She just doesn't exercise. She is at the beach dressed in her cute purple bikini. She rides horses and owns a pickup but she doesn't barrel race. This cowboy comes by her riding his horse and asks her if she wants to ride. She does. They go by a group of pickups and horse trailers and he say's that's where he is parked but they don't stop. They ride awhile then he brings her back to her pickup. Later that night she decides to go find him. She figured it was OK since he didn't say anything about having a gf. Still in her bikini she walks over that way. As she approaches a trailer away from everyone else a tall,huskier girl steps out and slams her fist into her stomach. Uullfff Pretty Girl grunts and drops to her knees. Quickly she's picked up and another fist slams into her lower belly then just above her navel. Uullff and uummfff she grunts as she steps back,falls to her knees doubled over. Jerked up again she now is shoved against the trailer and her arms fly up. Uughllmmfp,ullffmpp,uullfffmp,uughllffmpp and uughllffmp she grunts as she is punched hard just below and directly in her bellybutton. Clutching her belly,doubled over then on her knees she falls. She gets on her hands and knees attempting to stand up but the girl kicks her in her stomach like she's punting a football. Pretty Girl lets out a loud grunt with many moans as she flys across the sand. She curls in a fetal position gasping. Several girls approach to see what is happening. They are told that Pretty Girl is looking to take someone's cowboy. Pretty Girl is picked up with her arms held firmly behind her back. Uugh,uughfff,uullmmffp and uullmmff she grunts as she is punched around her bikini waistband. Another girl comes and uullffmp,uullffmpp,uulllffff,uughllfffmp, uughmmfff, uughmmfff, uullfff and uullfff is heard as she is punched directly in and all around her bellybutton as well as her lower tummy. She pleads, Please stop,pppleeease my stomach, my stomach hurts. A third girl approaches and she hammers her fist into Pretty Girl's solar plexus. Uullffmp,uullfff,uuulllffff and uulllffmp is heard as this fist pummels her stomach organ and abdomin. Sever blows may also strike her ribs. Pretty Girl is defeated but another girl wants to teach her a lesson. They place her in a trailer on her back and hold her spread eagle. She pleads that her stomach can't take anymore as the first girl walks up with a sledge hammer. First they drop it right on her bikini bottom twice then four more times near the waistband. She moans and begs for them to stop. Her intestinal area, her bellybutton and both sides of her navel are targeted next. They laugh as the hammer head disappears in her bellybutton hole. Uullffmp,uullffmmp,god that hurts,uullffmp and uughllfff she repeatedly grunts as her belly is pummeled by the sledge hammer. My belly,my belly hurts,pleease stop,my belly hurts she mumbles. These girls are mean becouse not only do they just drop the hammer they also swing it down into her belly. Finally they slam the hammer into her stomach organ four times and another five times in her solar plexus. She pukes from this then passes out. She is carried back to her pickup and placed in the bed .

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