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Date Posted: 19:08:30 11/21/05 Mon
Author: Nell
Author Host/IP: dial34-60.d.umn.edu / 131.212.34.60
Subject: Oh wow -
In reply to: sk 's message, "Go Next 1/1" on 18:11:14 11/21/05 Mon

that was great. What Jaybee said.

The section you imagine is so concrete, and so real. I particularly like hte way the operative narrator talks about seeing the end, but without being maudlin.

I suspect most end that way - too tired to fight anymore.

Great stuff.

Nell

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