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Date Posted: 22:14:44 01/13/17 Fri
Author: Cirrus
Subject: Ahhhh! Such a tease!
In reply to: Comicality 's message, "(Part Two)" on 21:54:43 01/13/17 Fri

I know these "glue" chapters are essential for the story, but when there is such a long wait between chapters, ending BEFORE the big important phone call is a little more frustrating. I'll forgive you if you don't make us wait as long for the next chapter. :)

It was a good chapter, and I enjoyed the conversation between Tristan and Lori, and Tristan's observations about his mom. But there wasn't much ACTION in terms of moving the story forward - it was more set-up than payoff. I wanna know what happens next RIGHT NOW! :)

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  • >> -- Mike84, 22:18:02 01/13/17 Fri

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