Date Posted:02:59:33 01/31/17 Tue Author: Cirrus Subject: Woohoo! New chapter! In reply to:
's message, "(Part Two)" on 20:48:53 01/30/17 Mon
I've always been fond of this story. The interaction between Shane and Demi is pretty believable. ("OMG! HE'S HOLDING MY HAND! THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING THAT HAS EVER HAPPENED!!!"). I love the mix of nervousness and excitement. I also like the Deme doesn't sound like a standard Comicality character. He feels a little more careful and formal when he says something because English isn't his native language (or that's the impression I get anyway).
Fun things you can find out with Nifty timestamps: This story was on hiatus for ELEVEN YEARS between Chapter 3 (2004) and Chapter 4 (2015). It's probably not surprising that with so many stories on the go, a few of them get lost in the shuffle for a while. :)