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Date Posted: 18:39:35 05/03/18 Thu
Author: Comicality
Subject: NICE!!! :)
In reply to: Bobby 's message, "Full Moon" on 23:30:18 04/30/18 Mon


I recently submitted a blog to Gayauthors about exposition and getting readers to create a concrete picture of what is going on. And what you've done here in this sneak peek is AMAZING! I have a clear picture of the main character, the time period (Which switches halfway through), the relationship between Paolo and his dad, the possibilities of a new adventure coming...you covered a lot of ground in a few paragraphs! And I know everything that I need to know to get anxious for more! WELL DONE!!!

I'm curious to see how the older story and this newer story will connect somehow!

I loved it! Keep going! I'll read when I can! K? ((Hugz))

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