Date Posted:19:20:13 09/22/09 Tue Author:hal Subject: interesting tale.... In reply to:
kamwolf
's message, "Servitude chapter 1" on 23:07:26 09/21/09 Mon
a new twist? on an old idea?
ony you can say, but the plot seems interesting enough.
you should've kept the intro out, and let the reader find out the character for themselves. i thought it was self explanatory.
