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Date Posted: 15:21:59 09/26/09 Sat
Author: Lucas
Subject: cool
In reply to: Mike 's message, "Prologue" on 04:02:17 09/26/09 Sat

I'm liking where it's going, I'll keep reading for sure.

One thing I'm finding distracting are the errors in grammar. I've found at least 7 while reading the prologue, and while it's good material, to someone as OCD as I am when it comes to grammar, it's detracting from the story.

Keep going though :)

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