Date Posted:09:31:52 01/08/08 Tue Author:Mad Bomber Subject: A well written story, but... In reply to:
WrathOfMagneto
's message, "(S) Another Lifetime ::Chapter One::" on 16:14:59 01/07/08 Mon
I'd say it's on the verge of the "No Rape" policy of the board. Don't get me wrong though, I'm not downing it or anything. I like your use of metaphors and analogies. And also the way you write things like, "a uniform pattern of chaos." Very good writing. I'd love to see where this is heading and will anxiously await the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
