Date Posted:00:40:50 01/09/08 Wed Author:wrathofmagneto Subject: Hmm...didn't think about that, lol. In reply to:
Mad Bomber
's message, "A well written story, but..." on 09:31:52 01/08/08 Tue
Either way, the scene in this chapter is by far the most graphic in the whole story, so there won't be a repeat. (I'm several chapters ahead in writing, lol) I tend to not even write sex into my stories, frankly because I don't think I'm any good at it, lol. I just hint at it and hope the point comes across.
The main plot of the story revolves around the crimes Ethan just committed, so I wanted that scene to have more of an impact. Without giving too much away, it's kind of a "thriller/mystery" and the main characters are trying to bring Ethan to justice.
If I need to, I could post a cleaner version, and you could just take that one down. Just let me know what I should do.
