Date Posted:22:53:12 08/22/09 Sat Author: Lemons Subject: Hehe In reply to:
hal
's message, "just plain awesome!" on 20:32:02 08/22/09 Sat
Thank you. This one won't be a very long story methinks. Certainly not a series. At least, I don't think so. It isn't planned that way anyway.
The reason you haven't seen more of my stories is that I start them and can't seem to finish them. I know, at least for myself, I hate just getting into a story, and there it sits - unfinished. I've got at least a dozen good starts, all sorts of genre's. But I get stumped, or my life turns upside down, and I just never get back to them.
This one, however, I started a few years ago, and recently realized exactly what I intend to do with the story. So I churned out a few more chapters and then thought about getting other's opinions before moving forward too much more. I've got two more chapters to post, then I'll be wanting all the feedback I can get. Both good and bad. I'm really happy that you like the story. But I need criticism as well. What needs changed? Are there holes in the story line that I'm not seeing? Are the characters developed enough? Things like that.
At any rate, I'm glad you enjoy it. And thank you for taking the time to read it. After the next two chapters are up, there will be a slow down in posting them (cause the rest not written yet), but I won't leave you hanging. This one will get finished.
