Date Posted:23:08:41 12/02/07 Sun Author: Lemons Subject: It hurts... In reply to:
Comicality
's message, "(Part Twenty)" on 08:45:37 12/02/07 Sun
Oh my dear sweet Jeebus! I laughed so hard at the sewer-shooter scene that I think I tore a muscle. Very good work, Com. The timing, the character responses...all perfect. I laughed 'til I pee'd.
This story just keeps getting better and better. This was another roller-coaster of a chapter. The anger and fury in the trance, the comedy afterward and the suspence at the end.
I'm gunna go read the black goo part again. That rocked!
