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Date Posted: 23:25:35 01/14/08 Mon
Author: Drew Green
Subject: Good start
In reply to: Irony 's message, "Also, I realise there are mistakes, and the ending isn't very fluid. Plus, this is only the first part. Just looking for opinions. Thanks. :)" on 20:10:47 12/30/07 Sun

A good start. Occult is a bit strong of a word, though I struggle for a different word in its place. It does feel that it needs more. Thank you for the good read.

Drew

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