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>Sorry for yet another message, but I looked through >every post on here and I haven't found a mention or >opinion of the unused extract involving Jim and the >soldier on the pier, that I read on the site. > >Have you all read it? What did you think of it? > >I think that the way it was written in the book was >very powerful - the narrative tailing off leaving the >image of a lit ciggarette seemed to me to be a >"mature" depiction of the scene, echoing Jim's recent >personality development, in that it highlighted Jim's >independence. > >I wonder if the extract had been included in the book, >that it would have made his first time with Doyler a >little less powerful (I read the extract on the site >before I came to that point in the book anyway, so it >was in the back of my mind at Muglins in the book.) It >would have been lovely if Jim and Doyler had first >been with each other, don't you think? > >What are everyone's thoughts?

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