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Date Posted: 02:33:15 01/27/07 Sat
Author: Theresa
Subject: Inside...
In reply to: Theresa 's message, "My hug scene - off the top of my head." on 02:29:58 01/27/07 Sat

Sorry that should be immersed. Emersed is a different word.

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  • Oh, this is lovely, Theresa. You avoided the cliche phrases and focused on the emotion of the moment. Makes me want to read the rest of the fic. :) (NT) -- Pixie, 10:51:35 01/28/07 Sun

  • Thank you. I wonder if you could do the same with your scene. How explicit a scene is the story asking for? And yes, the story will ask for it's own scene. Do you have to go intense and passionate? Can you go with poetic innuendo? Is it really important to name body parts or positions? Sometimes it is very important, sometimes it isn't. What might be helpful is to categorize the love scene. Is this making any sense? My breakfast hasn't kicked in yet. Email me if you want and we can talk in more detail. (NT) -- Theresa - who has written more than her share of steamy scenes., 13:19:38 01/28/07 Sun

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