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Date Posted: 10:20:39 07/20/07 Fri
Author: Dream Angel
Subject: Free Spirit Breeze
In reply to: ~butterfly 's message, "love poem for v" on 09:51:44 07/11/07 Wed

>This poem of yours Butterfly truly moved me!
Your choice of words conjured up perfectly the
intense emotion of passionate desire that is
being described and that the reader can definitely
identify with!

~Free Spirit Breeze~
>
>the sail of love goes unfilled in my heart still…
>like a cool breeze stalling in the dead heat of summer
>and underneath my skin…
>deep feelings sweat hidden beads
>unwilling to surface freely
>only my eyes swell with tears
>as a storm within builds quietly
>i am left to hold back curses
>i am left reading old poems by you
>on sun bleached tattered and worn pages
>asking so sincerely, what am i to do
>when I am so in LOVE with YOU
>because you are the free spirit breeze
>the gentleness that fills the sails to my heart
>the kindness that kisses my soul
>the flirt who dances with me in my dreams
>touching more than the sublime
>you can touch everyone and everything
>yes, you are my cool sensitive sensation
>don't let me burn on and on silently in pain
>idleness without love can make one feel insane
>my lips quiver now, as i make these requests
>come to me, come to me before i turn to ashes
>hurry my passionate poet with your sweetness
>let your affectionate love stir me and softly flow
>like a whisper to my ear, fill my sails with a breeze
>let me feel you again and again, till i am at ease

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