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Date Posted: 19:43:19 12/12/07 Wed
Author: XmasLovr
Subject: Oh my, clenched my teeth so much for a while that they hurt - very intense, scary, then so sweet and wonderful, then...
In reply to: . 's message, "In the Bleak Midwinter" on 09:01:18 12/12/07 Wed

... I'm just going to pretend this last line never happened, or that it was just a teeny tiny scare... All will be well, all will be well, all will be well...

Great story!!

Yup, Doc wrote that.

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[> I thought the writing was superb, and obviously written by someone in the medical field. (Inside.) -- DollyDoodle, 20:31:25 12/12/07 Wed [1]

I don't really like giving negative critiques with fanfics, particularly with such a well written, well paced, and interesting story. So this isn't negative. it's just a comment. If this is part of a longer story, then I've no problem with it at all. I don't even mind the unexpected ending, as that's the way long stories play out.

But as a "short" story, it would have been perfect ending when Mac woke up, without all the explanation and responses of other characters....Only in my opinion of course. As it stands, it's still a terrific story, and I know that many readers need all the extras. So don't take this a slap. It isn't.

And I completely admire the quality of writing, and I admit I'm a little jealous!

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