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• Inside for Jamie>>> -- celtgirl (), 16:08:11 11/03/10 Wed
  • I was thinking one thing about Jamie and then by the time I got to paragraph 5 it feels like he is tortured in his mind and heart. Cindy, I could really feel the sensuality of this scene and the 'red' evokes such passion and emotion in this scene. Extraordinary piece of writing girl. Jamie - ahhhhhhhhh what a man tortured or not. (NT) -- Tracy, 16:30:14 11/03/10 Wed
  • Lovely writing, Cindy, you've painted a vivid picture of this scene! I would guess that all prostitutes must compartmentalize their thoughts and feelings this way or they can't mentally survive. That man needs some true loving and I can give it to him! (NT) -- Denise, 17:21:48 11/03/10 Wed
  • Wow, very intense and beautiful writing!! I think I better gear myself up to go to some dark places with this man in the next book. I know alot of the other ladies know Jamie better than me, but I'm continually surprised by him. (NT) -- Mahri, 18:28:59 11/03/10 Wed
  • I don't like seeing him battling so much inner conflict. But I think I always knew there was this darker side to Jamie. He's had to play so many games, he's become a master at all of them. Spasiba bolshoy, moya podruga. (NT) -- E, 20:24:28 11/03/10 Wed
  • Oh Goodness! That's all I can say!!! (NT) -- IsabelleKiltup, 09:36:40 11/04/10 Thu
    • well, I should add Beautiful writing once again Cindy, I'm just speechless about Jamie 'g'! (NT) -- IsabelleKiltup, 09:38:14 11/04/10 Thu
  • Gorgeous and intense! You really nailed the compartmentalizing and its connection to one's soul. I could feel the warmth of their bodies, but the coldness of where they are at the same time. Amazing writing, Cindy! (NT) -- Lil, 09:44:14 11/04/10 Thu
  • As the others have said, amazing writing Cindy! I can feel the warmth inside that hut and all the other emotions you are offering for the senses, wow!! (NT) -- LisaW, 10:27:41 11/04/10 Thu
  • You brought me in to the hut with anticipation of a more congenial partnering, this is a very dark place for Jamie and I can actually feel his hatred in this scene, it's palpable. What I am thinking is, with great hatred there also can come great love, tortured as it may be. (NT) -- LadyDuBois (), 16:52:10 11/21/10 Sun

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• Wow! You would post that just as Ron goes off on a business trip! Seriously, though, you've yet again painted a truly vivid picture with all the senses. I think this line, though, could apply to more than one of the men in your books: He knew how to ruin her for all other men that would share her bed after him (NT) -- Carla, 19:04:26 11/03/10 Wed

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• congrats on making Members Favourite on Chapters! That's great! (NT) -- Lil, 09:46:36 11/04/10 Thu

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• Thanks, ladies- your kind words continue to make me feel I'm on the right path as this book starts to draw itself together. I have to tell you what my husband said after he read this last night. He had all sorts of nice things to say, but then ends with 'really, I don't know what his problem is, he's single, she's obviously attractive and it's sex- what's to agonize about?' I said, 'Are you serious? She's blackmailed him into her bed, and he hates her on top of that.' To which his response was a sigh and then 'You just don't understand men, sweetie.' (NT) -- celtgirl (), 11:08:13 11/04/10 Thu
  • Hahahaaa! Jeet read it too:) (NT) -- Trac, 11:18:03 11/04/10 Thu
    • Were his thoughts similar to Pat's? :) (NT) -- celtgirl, 11:22:50 11/04/10 Thu
      • Yep, pretty much bang on. Gotta love guys! They cut through it all and get down to what's important ;) (NT) -- Trac, 21:41:33 11/06/10 Sat

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• BTW, this scene will make a whole lot more sense when you, as readers, see everything that got the man in the position (no pun intended) that he currently finds himself in. (NT) -- celtgirl, 12:32:07 11/04/10 Thu
  • I'm really curious about that. Btw, congratulations on the 5-star rating! (NT) -- E, 12:59:16 11/04/10 Thu