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> >>I'm debating on sending Dave the 10 chapters of my >>story as it was written a few years ago. Can't seem to >>work up the time to finish the re-write on it, so in >>the mean time this will give Driver something to >>critique....... >> >I'm no critic, and certainly not a critique-er You >write, I read, no rules. Punct and gram the way you >like; I'll never complain. > >On cars, a few years ago I was on the Island of >Rhodes, and my rental car was an old Fiat Topolino, a >tiny, underpowered tin can, but perfect for the narrow >roads and alleys there. It had a cloth roof that you >pulled back by hand, and the windows didn't roll down, >even in the doors. > >I didn't know that, and when pulling into the pay lot >at the harbor one night, a nice guy leaving held his >paid ticket out to me. I couldn't roll the window >down, and he was too close too open the door, so I >pulled the roof back and stood up. > >That caused much hilarity, but free parking was worth >it. When we went back to Athens, I rented a fancy >Peugeot, and was treated with respect and dignity. I >didn't get any more free parking, though. > >That goes to show something, and you all can figure >out what it is. > >d

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