Re: Sweeping The Dungeon -- Poetry Grace and Insanity

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Date Posted: 06/27/04 10:39:34pm
Author: Moonchild
Subject: Re: Sweeping The Dungeon
In reply to: Leisa*) 's message, "Sweeping The Dungeon" on 06/27/04 6:26:20pm

I think it was interesting and pretty and I enjoyed the images but I always like your poems. Wonderful write!

>Sweeping The Dungeon
>
>The men march
>across the dirt
>that sand turned
>overnight
>Women plant seeds
>to nourish
>the children
>made overbright
>The wind whips
>around split hairs
>to make war
>and melt faces
>
>The moon fades
>the tide over water
>and frothy caps
>that beam sunshine
>Clouds cover
>blue light
>that steels bones
>and gnashes wood
>
>The ink stains
>indelible finger
>prints that cannot
>erase the words
>set in motion
>to take stone
>and bury ashes
>
>Leisa*)
>062704Š
>
>disclaimer: yeah, it is sorta cold and sterile,
>{what do you think?}
> was more of a writing exercise, as I am itching to
>write something/anything

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Re: Sweeping The Dungeon -- mirror man, 06/30/04 1:05:36am

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>I think it was interesting and pretty and I enjoyed >the images but I always like your poems. Wonderful >write! > > >>Sweeping The Dungeon >> >>The men march >>across the dirt >>that sand turned >>overnight >>Women plant seeds >>to nourish >>the children >>made overbright >>The wind whips >>around split hairs >>to make war >>and melt faces >> >>The moon fades >>the tide over water >>and frothy caps >>that beam sunshine >>Clouds cover >>blue light >>that steels bones >>and gnashes wood >> >>The ink stains >>indelible finger >>prints that cannot >>erase the words >>set in motion >>to take stone >>and bury ashes >> >>Leisa*) >>062704Š >> >>disclaimer: yeah, it is sorta cold and sterile, >>{what do you think?} >> was more of a writing exercise, as I am itching to >>write something/anything
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