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Date Posted: 12/21/08 10:11:15pm
Author: Leisa
Subject: Re: Growing Up; It's Like Holding Your Breath
In reply to: Brad 's message, "Re: Growing Up; It's Like Holding Your Breath" on 12/10/08 10:54:13pm

only because it visits me on a regular basis. do you think anyone would choose this life filled with constant sorrow? I am so sick of feeling sad, alienated.........alone.


>Like the last 2 lines,
>reminds me of one of my fave movies,
>Joe vs. the Volcano
>
>PS the answer to the preamble question is...
>because youre ALWAYS thinking about death :P
>
>>Growing Up;
>>It's Like Holding Your Breath
>>
>>Prey:
>>Unable to unwind because of the loss;
>>away from home
>>away from normal
>>
>>Preamble:
>>He asked me with a smile
>>why was I thinking about death
>>and what I would wear to my burial
>>
>>Solution 1:
>>Next time I'll bring the "death" poem
>>or maybe I'll make a fresh list
>>since there are so many to add
>>
>>Enwreathing:
>>the thing is
>>when you grow up surviving
>>all those around you;
>>you a)never acclimate
>>no matter how many
>>b)think about death and mortality
>>more
>>than the average person
>>
>>It isn't "morbid" as he said
>>it's my "normal"
>>unbreathing
>>holding every precious scrap
>>every breath becomes laboured
>>every shoe waits to drop
>>yet every now and then
>>in the middle, in the pauses
>>I exhale
>>
>>Settle:
>>it's no wonder
>>the afflictions
>>I've grown over years
>>like vines over ruins
>>and wine under veins
>>that seep, distilled
>>and toxic
>>brain waves that forgot
>>pageantry
>>on some long remembered travail
>>tapestry travesty
>>back
>>back
>>way back when
>>
>>Tired unyielding
>>unwilling to give up
>>or in
>>I traipse along
>>this crooked path
>>
>>Leisa*)
>>12.05.08©

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