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Date Posted: 02/20/06 8:37:49pm
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: Fig Leaf Clothing
In reply to: Matthew 's message, "Fig Leaf Clothing" on 02/ 1/06 9:14:52pm

i like the word "flitter" for a variety of reasons, as for the poem.....well.......hmmmm

you've got a talent, use it wisely

Leisa*)

>Auburn butterflies flitter
>in a hay-fever breeze;
>discarded condom delicacies.
>
>“Be gone!” said the tree,
>Unfurling bare bark proudly.
>None were born with leaves.
>
>Comments + Critique appreciated. Btw, i'm Matthew
>from WW...

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