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Date Posted: 10/14/09 11:52:16pm
Author: B
Subject: Re: Fractal
In reply to: Frances 's message, "Fractal" on 10/14/09 7:33:55pm

>observes the split of granites glint

LOVE that line,
but the 2 below bother me, just dont seem to gel.

>and all around splinter sharp rock chips
>with bloodied feet swim

Fractal is a good title for this piece

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  • Re: Fractal -- B, 10/16/09 8:21:36am

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