Re: for the ten -- Poetry Grace and Insanity

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Date Posted: 01/ 5/05 5:34:26pm
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: for the ten
In reply to: B 's message, "for the ten" on 12/26/04 1:20:39am

uh, you had something going here Brad, until that final stanza which I would totally cut or rewrite or something....
maybe just end it at "forgiveness is for those who ask"

Happy New Year!

Leisa*)

>Shall I open a door for you?
>to mock?
>Talk?
>
>Take my hand
>and
>
>dance with me
>find the time
>when the train horn blows
>
>below
>you'll find me
>besides the tracks
>amongst white rails
>
>where all is cold warm
>numbed to the touch
>
>you will see
>a bloodied heart
>pumping fervously
>
>Forgiveness is for those who ask
>and if "Love is never saying Im sorry"?
>Then you've never loved anyone

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>uh, you had something going here Brad, until that >final stanza which I would totally cut or rewrite or >something.... >maybe just end it at "forgiveness is for those who ask" > >Happy New Year! > >Leisa*) > > >>Shall I open a door for you? >>to mock? >>Talk? >> >>Take my hand >>and >> >>dance with me >>find the time >>when the train horn blows >> >>below >>you'll find me >>besides the tracks >>amongst white rails >> >>where all is cold warm >>numbed to the touch >> >>you will see >>a bloodied heart >>pumping fervously >> >>Forgiveness is for those who ask >>and if "Love is never saying Im sorry"? >>Then you've never loved anyone
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