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Date Posted: 06/30/04 1:27:30am
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: inches
In reply to: mirror man 's message, "inches" on 06/30/04 12:00:52am

yeah this one's a bit too disorganised to make much sense to me, but one thing, I like poems that ask questions but I don't think you should answer them. Let the reader do some of the work, although in this case, this is too much work.
Sorry, it just doesn't work for me, too much of a stretch

Leisa*)

>Talk you,
>wish to know?
>Now I tell
>by time one score
>will you measure ends white
>in inches. Fahrenheit years
>in brown anger
>wonder
>would all this rain
>rain out the green
>already there?
>A: no.
>
>Might you also think
>your two species
>fertile between?
>Spring off weaned.
>And in this sickly increase
>hold hope. Yet
>by payment ugly
>give right birth:
>become obsolete.
>
>Also,
>fierce looking takes,
>reflection happy gives
>and though this stops
>continues
>hybrid.
>
>Being so origin.
>
>copyright 2004
>by Scott Montelauro
>I do now put this work in public domain.

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