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Date Posted: 19:10:54 08/27/02 Tue
Author: Avalon
Subject: Both rewrites are great!
In reply to: The Darkling 's message, "Re: "How the finale should have been" - Version 2" on 17:37:35 08/27/02 Tue

And Beck, this is exactly what I wanted to see! I'm just going to go now, and pretend that this is what REALLY happened. (Believe me, I'll be re-reading this version every time I start thinking about how the tv version went. *sigh* Both your version and Lark's make so much more sense than that one did...)


>Coming out of the trance, Sara is weak from blood loss
>and the blade in her gut, but she is not dying. Ian
>and Gabe are looking at her and to each other, trying
>to figure out exactly what to do. The dilemma is
>solved for them as Irons saunters in. Ian bows his
>head as Irons comes to stand beside him and in front
>of Sara. Sara nearly convinces Irons to take the
>gauntlet, but at the last moment he sees the
>deception, realizes that she is trying to have the
>blade kill him as a pretender. He demands that Ian be
>the one to remove it. The expression on Ian's face is
>a combination of hatred and horror at what he is being
>asked to do.
>
>Ian puts his back to Irons and slowly slides his hand
>into the gauntlet, leaning forward and whispering to
>Sara, "I'm sorry," before kissing her passionately.
>She doesn't resist. As the kiss is over, Ian pulls
>the blade out of her quickly and holds it aloft. Blue
>streaks of lightning pulse from the blade and over
>those in the room, driving Ian to his knees. He falls
>over, lying prone at Sara's feet. Everyone thinks he
>is dead, obviously. Sara kneels, as does Irons. Gabe
>calls to him, "Nottingham?" Irons calls to him,
>"Son?" Sara calls to him, "Ian?" His eyes open, a
>blue flickering replacing the normal color.
>
>Roll credits (and plan like mad for Season 3)

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Replies:

  • hmmm -- wormie, 19:39:08 08/27/02 Tue
  • Re: hmmm- How about a little help, Wormie! -- Phoenix, 19:54:42 08/27/02 Tue
  • Re: hmmm -- The Darkling, 22:08:36 08/27/02 Tue

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