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Date Posted: 13:08:31 03/10/03 Mon
Author: Beck
Subject: Brava!! This is so well written. Kudos to you.
In reply to: Vekhadre 's message, "Noli Me Tangere (Ch. 2)" on 03:09:07 03/10/03 Mon

You have not only caught my attention with this one, but have completely held it hostage. Incredibly well-crafted fic. The characterizations are spot on and you are quite the wordsmith. Very happy to see fic of this calibre.

Thank you and please continue soon.

Beck

fave bits:

Now her rug was soaked in cold water, the bowl was halfway across the room, and she would probably end up with a black eye. At least she still had the washcloth, so she used it on her eye
(I howled at this....followed by a cackle that the neighbors probably heard)

Once the spasms had passed, she touched his shoulder, and he recoiled. His eyes were desperate, wild. "Please don't send me back," he implored raggedly. "I can fix it."
(So wonderfully childlike and heartrending...can really see the child within the man here and instantly pictured Ian as a child pleading with Irons)

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