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>> Would appreciate any comments you can give on this, >> main concerns are these lines (annotated <). >> Thanks >> Marikova >Powerful poem It stands well as is. >> >> Watching Life Depart (V2) >> >> She lies there >> Tiny fragile doll thing >> Waiting for the journey to begin.< wilting to an end. >> I sit numbly by her side< >> Silently screaming,< Silently bleeding, >> Helpless.< >> Oh baby, I’m so sorry. >> Her little hand lies on mine >> Eyes almost black >> Like windows left wide open >> Staring at something only she can see< calling out >to me >> And her innocent voice sounds in my mind< Firing my >mind >> “Mummy look!” >> Oh baby, don’t go. >> Close now; small breaths, so small >> Like the world in which >> Only she and I exist. >> Oh baby, please stay. >> I am frightened to blink, >> Yet I do >> And the meagre light >> Of some far off room >> Ceases to light her face >> As the tenant leaves; >> Oh baby…. >> >> Marikova ®© 24.06.2000 >> Re-written 27.06.2000

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