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Date Posted: 22:31:18 04/12/12 Thu
Author: Araninda
Subject: I guess I have a different answer. . . . Inside
In reply to: Theresa 's message, "How would things be different if:" on 09:57:06 04/11/12 Wed

Harm was jittery throughout the episode, thinking about Mac's slip of the tongue that it was Little AJ's 5th birthday rather than his 4th birthday. I think Harm was not ready to "seal the deal" yet. And if Mac had wanted to move up the timetable, I think Harm would have backed away, bringing up all kinds of practical things that he had been thinking throughout the episode. . . how much does it cost to raise a kid, would either he or Mac need to be in private practice since they couldn't work together, etc.

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[> [> Yet, I'm with you on this thinking, Araninda. -- carramor, 23:22:21 04/12/12 Thu


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[> [> if we're talking Gorilla in charge- you bet that's exactly what would have happened- if you're talking what would happen if nature ran its course- it would have been more honest like the last 7 and a half minutes and they would have decided theyd waited long enough for the deal and would probably have gone through with it - then - as they worked out the 'plan' I think the admission of love would have fallen into place -- chris k, 09:43:57 04/13/12 Fri


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[> [> [> thanks ladies- just looked at the clip - and most definitely - here's how CLK sees it - inside -- chris k (CLK), 11:23:32 04/13/12 Fri

this is a quick throw together- no spell check, no double check - first draft- and all I have time for.

season 9 and 10 would be more like the way Bones has been going -

here you go- this picks up at the end of the clip:

"Anything else?" Mac glanced up from the desk.

This was it, his chance. Wasn't it?

"Harm?"

"Hm?" Could he do it. Should he?

"Did you need something else from me?" she asked.

"Oh, uh no, I was just , I mean..."

Mac had to chuckle, for an eloquent lawyer sometimes this man had a hell of a time stringing a sentence together. "What?"

He hitched his shoulder in another casual shrug and took a step closer. "Would it be so bad?"

Mac tilted her head, staring at him. He wondered, not for the first time how would their lives be different if she could simply read his mind? His feelings. And then he saw it. The moment understanding dawned.

Her smile slipped. "Harm. Exactly what are you trying to say?"

This was it. Sink or swim. "Would it be so bad, I mean, if we upped the time table. You know, joined the club?"

Now her eyes rounded like a startled owl. If she hand't already been sitting Harm was pretty sure she would have keeled over. Her mouth opened and closed before any words could came out.

"Okay, never mind. Forget I said anything." He took one step back ready to do an about face and get out the door before he said something else that would ruin everything. Permanently.

"Don't you dare." She shot up out of her chair.

He stopped in his tracks.

One hand on the corner of her desk as though she needed something to help hold her up, she took one step in his direction. "What are you trying to say?"

He took a step forward. One small step at a time. "I already said it."

She took another step and prayed she wasn't getting this wrong."No it wouldn't be so bad." There. she said it.

A small grin tugged at the corner of his mouth. "So, if I said that maybe I did want to, you know, up the time table, you wouldn't keyhaul me?"

"Are you?" She leaned more heavily against the desk. "Harm, are you saying you don't want to wait another year for our deal?"

He swallowed hard and moved forward until he stood inches away from Mac. If he stood still he could almost hear her breathe. "Yeah, Mac. I mean, if you're okay with it. I'd like to, well..."

"Have a baby." Thank God she was holding onto the desk, Mac wasn't all that sure her legs alone could continue to hold her up. "Now?"

Harm nodded.

"Together?" she asked as if it wer possible to have a baby apart.

"Yes, Mac. You and me, have a baby, together. Now, not next year."

This had to be a dream. If she blinked, she was sure she'd open her eyes and find herself staring at the ceiling of her bedroom. What the hell. "Okay. Let's."

Harm stuck his hand out, a grin as wide as the Potomac took over his face. "New deal."

Her heart threatening to beat out of her chest, Mac smiled back, then slid her hand in his. "New deal."

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[> [> [> [> perfect ! -- Laurence, 12:13:46 04/13/12 Fri


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[> [> [> [> If only ... this would have been so much better! -- Lee, 12:54:26 04/13/12 Fri


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[> [> [> [> Great story, chris! Love that CLK is back with storywriting! Hope to encourage you to repost some of your past writings as well. -- Araninda, 15:45:13 04/13/12 Fri


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[> [> [> [> [> I think everything I've written is at Fanfiction.net - Lost most of the adult versions when GeoCities went down - but fanfiction has the rest -- chris k, 19:55:33 04/15/12 Sun


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[> [> [> [> Great vignette! But remember the saying: "first comes marriage ..then comes ..." ... And yes, watching Bones I think about what could have been. -- jan, 22:00:11 04/13/12 Fri


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[> [> [> [> Right on! -- Theresa, 11:18:54 04/14/12 Sat


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[> [> [> [> Perfect script! -- Sunset, 11:31:21 04/14/12 Sat


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[> [> [> [> I love it! -- JAG Junkie (Ronda), 15:56:06 04/14/12 Sat


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