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Subject: Re: Great Closer Author: Rob [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 09:39:01 09/09/11 Fri In reply to: Boyd Percy 's message, "Great Closer" on 02:37:57 09/09/11 Fri >Wonderful closing! You always seem to have a great >closing chapter and this story is no exemption. >Enjoyable sequel to Alone Together. I had one idea what the title meant until I read the last few lines and then I realized that it could involve something else. Rob [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> [> Subject: Re: Great Closer Author: Mike [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 17:32:53 09/11/11 Sun As much as I loved "Alone Together", I have to say that the sequel was a bit of a disappointment. It was well written and hit all the points that the first story opened, but somehow it didn't have the poignancy the first one did. I'm not complaining, I liked reading the story and looked forward to every chapter, but I can't help but feel that there was something missing. Maybe it's because they passed over all the problems too easily. Every problem had a set and quickly found solution. Too much of a fairy tale conclusion, I guess.