Typo in latest BitH -- Spearfish Lake Tales

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Subject: Typo in latest BitH

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Joe Williams

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Date Posted: 00:38:52 11/24/14 Mon

Wes, found a couple slight typos in the latest chapter, first you switched names, typing Jack instead of Frenchy, and second there's a word or two missing later in the line talking about Cody (see the double asterisks around the text):

�That damn Frenchy,� Alan said. �He�s a real pain in the ass.�

�Yeah, I got into it with him a little yesterday morning,� Jack said. �Larry Coopshaw was heading to hold on to me so **Jack** could pound me, but **Cody was again** and got involved a little, too. After that, Vixen and I talked it over some and we think we�ve come up with a Frenchy deterrent. You got it, Vixen?�

She dug in her denim purse, and pulled out a spray can. �Jack got this for you, in case you need it,� she said, handing it to him.

�What is it?�

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