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Subject: Re: Sandy/JennLynn inconsistency Author: Dr. Memory [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 07:16:24 08/15/10 Sun In reply to: Wes 's message, "Re: Sandy/JennLynn inconsistency" on 09:42:25 08/11/10 Wed I went back and read Magic Carpet 15 and Hat Trick 29 back to back. In MC, the first ever Jennlynn/Sandy conversation is on a Sunday morning, in HT, the same conversation is on a Saturday morning. Minor, but easily fixable if/when one of these gets a revision. What actually bothered me more was that, a few hours after talking with her old high school friend Dayna, Jennlynn is said (in MC) to be thinking, not of Dayna, but of Dayna's friend Sandy. But mentioning the meeting with Dayna in MC would be too much of a spoiler for the ending of HT, I think. In that respect I really like the way MC and HT intersect: MC contains hints but not real spoilers about where HT is heading. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> [> [> Subject: Re: Sandy/JennLynn inconsistency Author: Wes [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 07:56:33 08/15/10 Sun >I went back and read Magic Carpet 15 and Hat Trick 29 >back to back. In MC, the first ever Jennlynn/Sandy >conversation is on a Sunday morning, in HT, the same >conversation is on a Saturday morning. Minor, but >easily fixable if/when one of these gets a revision. >What actually bothered me more was that, a few hours >after talking with her old high school friend Dayna, >Jennlynn is said (in MC) to be thinking, not of Dayna, >but of Dayna's friend Sandy. But mentioning the >meeting with Dayna in MC would be too much of a >spoiler for the ending of HT, I think. In that respect >I really like the way MC and HT intersect: MC contains >hints but not real spoilers about where HT is heading. Wow, hadn't noticed the date inconsistency. I'll fix it sometime (too much to do today.) If that's the worst inconsistency I have where stories intercept, I'll be happy! -- Wes -- Wes