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Subject: Re: Thoughts on New Year's Eve


Author:
Leo Kerr
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Date Posted: 16:56:33 12/31/15 Thu
In reply to: Wes 's message, "Thoughts on New Year's Eve" on 15:53:55 12/31/15 Thu

I still wonder how, when you're advancing several parallel story-lines across time (and space,) how you keep straight when you have the same scene presented twice.. with different perspectives.. and different viewpoints. And not wanting to "spoil" the "second" book, or not make a major continuity gaff of, for example, having identified six people on the raft, and then the next book has eight?

I also have a hard time believing that "Icewater" was about four years ago.. I guess I found this world when I stumbled across "Girl in the Mirror" (what an introduction) being posted. It didn't seem *that* long ago!

Thanks for sharing; I've messed around with writing fiction since I was in high school way too many years ago, and I've never really gotten close to the point of submitting it for a rejection notice (thinking of Dave and the slush-pile, here.) I've often been able to play with some character development here and there, or a scene there or here, but never all in the same "world" much less the same story-line. But it's certainly harder than it looks.

Leo

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Author:
Wes
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Date Posted: 18:16:19 12/31/15 Thu

I try to not let that happen too often. Occasionally it does, of course, and especially so in the upcoming new "Dawnwalker" book, where several scenes are seen from a different perspective. I know it's happening, of course, and I always review the existing scene before I write the new one -- and still make mistakes from time to time. I try not to, of course.

What really gets tough is a situation in a book further up the pike, where a major character has to retell a story she has told before to a different group of people -- I have to portray the same information without it looking like I copied and pasted the original scene (which I actually did not, except for a couple of paragraphs.)

It was especially difficult to keep from treading on my own toes in the upcoming book since I wrote most of Icewater in 2010-11, although parts of it clear back in 2006, so review of the pertinent sections was important. Of course, it's hard to believe that I wrote the original Dawnwalker in the winter of 2000-01. I was not even thinking about publishing it in any way at the time; I just wanted something to do on long winter evenings, and decided to write a long book and see where it came out. I would never have dreamed it would come out where it has, many books later and still going strong. Dawnwalker was number seven and the first of the series; the upcoming book is number 55 and the ninth of the series and there are follow-up books in the works.

-- Wes


>I still wonder how, when you're advancing several
>parallel story-lines across time (and space,) how you
>keep straight when you have the same scene presented
>twice.. with different perspectives.. and different
>viewpoints. And not wanting to "spoil" the "second"
>book, or not make a major continuity gaff of, for
>example, having identified six people on the raft, and
>then the next book has eight?
>
>I also have a hard time believing that "Icewater" was
>about four years ago.. I guess I found this world when
>I stumbled across "Girl in the Mirror" (what an
>introduction) being posted. It didn't seem *that* long
>ago!
>
>Thanks for sharing; I've messed around with writing
>fiction since I was in high school way too many years
>ago, and I've never really gotten close to the point
>of submitting it for a rejection notice (thinking of
>Dave and the slush-pile, here.) I've often been able
>to play with some character development here and
>there, or a scene there or here, but never all in the
>same "world" much less the same story-line. But it's
>certainly harder than it looks.
>
>Leo

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Author:
Jim Scott
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Date Posted: 00:08:38 01/01/16 Fri


On the site Storiesonline an author known as Aroslav uses spreadsheets with many worksheets to keep detailed records of the cast, timeline, relationships, etc. all to reduce errors. See http://storiesonline.net/ablog/aroslav/4 for his explanation.

Jim


>I try to not let that happen too often. Occasionally
>it does, of course, and especially so in the upcoming
>new "Dawnwalker" book, where several scenes are seen
>from a different perspective. I know it's happening,
>of course, and I always review the existing scene
>before I write the new one -- and still make mistakes
>from time to time. I try not to, of course.
>
>What really gets tough is a situation in a book
>further up the pike, where a major character has to
>retell a story she has told before to a different
>group of people -- I have to portray the same
>information without it looking like I copied and
>pasted the original scene (which I actually did not,
>except for a couple of paragraphs.)
>
>It was especially difficult to keep from treading on
>my own toes in the upcoming book since I wrote most of
>Icewater in 2010-11, although parts of it clear
>back in 2006, so review of the pertinent sections was
>important. Of course, it's hard to believe that I
>wrote the original Dawnwalker in the winter of
>2000-01. I was not even thinking about publishing it
>in any way at the time; I just wanted something to do
>on long winter evenings, and decided to write a long
>book and see where it came out. I would never have
>dreamed it would come out where it has, many books
>later and still going strong. Dawnwalker was number
>seven and the first of the series; the upcoming book
>is number 55 and the ninth of the series and there are
>follow-up books in the works.
>
>-- Wes
>
>
>>I still wonder how, when you're advancing several
>>parallel story-lines across time (and space,) how you
>>keep straight when you have the same scene presented
>>twice.. with different perspectives.. and different
>>viewpoints. And not wanting to "spoil" the "second"
>>book, or not make a major continuity gaff of, for
>>example, having identified six people on the raft, and
>>then the next book has eight?
>>
>>I also have a hard time believing that "Icewater" was
>>about four years ago.. I guess I found this world when
>>I stumbled across "Girl in the Mirror" (what an
>>introduction) being posted. It didn't seem *that* long
>>ago!
>>
>>Thanks for sharing; I've messed around with writing
>>fiction since I was in high school way too many years
>>ago, and I've never really gotten close to the point
>>of submitting it for a rejection notice (thinking of
>>Dave and the slush-pile, here.) I've often been able
>>to play with some character development here and
>>there, or a scene there or here, but never all in the
>>same "world" much less the same story-line. But it's
>>certainly harder than it looks.
>>
>>Leo

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