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Subject: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Wes
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Date Posted: 15:12:01 05/01/12 Tue

The "What's your thinking" thread has sure developed some thoughts -- and one new book so far. But it's gotten so complicated that new posts are hard to find, so let's start a new thread and abandon the old one.

The question is as before: can anyone think of a minor character in some past story that seems interesting enough to have a story written around them?

I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead characters -- Randy, Jennlynn, or the like.

However, I'd be particularly interested in characters that aren't from Spearfish Lake -- in other words, Bradford stories, or others. I have a pretty good backlog of Spearfish Lake based stories, but am weaker on others. Let's hear some ideas!

-- Wes

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[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Fred
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Date Posted: 16:59:33 05/01/12 Tue

>Hi Wes

Don't know if anyone else has suggested the following- the message string is really dense. How about the young kid from Florida who goes flying for the first time with Mark, and subsequently, years later, Mark comes across a magazine article talking about the black Air Force pilot involved in the war over in the sandbox? How did he get to be a pilot? How could he interact with, for example, some of the programs at Lambdatron? I'm sure there are several other "How could he" and "How did he" type questions that could make for an interesting read-

Keep up the good work- And, if there were any way to do it logically, some kind of a reprise on the Henry Toivo story would make for a trip down memory lane.

Regards

Fred


The "What's your thinking" thread has sure developed
>some thoughts -- and one new book so far. But it's
>gotten so complicated that new posts are hard to find,
>so let's start a new thread and abandon the old one.
>
>The question is as before: can anyone think of a minor
>character in some past story that seems interesting
>enough to have a story written around them?
>
>I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of
>the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's
>set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead
>characters -- Randy, Jennlynn, or the like.
>
>However, I'd be particularly interested in characters
>that aren't from Spearfish Lake -- in other words,
>Bradford stories, or others. I have a pretty good
>backlog of Spearfish Lake based stories, but am weaker
>on others. Let's hear some ideas!
>
>-- Wes
[> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Andrew
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Date Posted: 11:18:47 05/02/12 Wed

>>Hi Wes
>
>Don't know if anyone else has suggested the following-
>the message string is really dense. How about the
>young kid from Florida who goes flying for the first
>time with Mark, and subsequently, years later, Mark
>comes across a magazine article talking about the
>black Air Force pilot involved in the war over in the
>sandbox? How did he get to be a pilot? How could he
>interact with, for example, some of the programs at
>Lambdatron? I'm sure there are several other "How
>could he" and "How did he" type questions that could
>make for an interesting read-
>
>Keep up the good work- And, if there were any way to
>do it logically, some kind of a reprise on the Henry
>Toivo story would make for a trip down memory lane.
>
>Regards
>
>Fred
>
>
As Wes wants to write a post 2000 story, how about starting from when Major Seasprunk retires from the air force. That way he could dripfeed as much or as little of the back story as he needs.

Regards. Andrew
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Sam
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Date Posted: 22:09:44 05/01/12 Tue

I think I mentioned her before: Larissa Hamilton, the busty fantasy author from PUTP. Just barely past 2000: I think she's around for late 2001 - early 2002 in that book.
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
howard
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Date Posted: 01:50:35 05/02/12 Wed

Carl from Dress to Desire
Trish York
the guys who set up Lambdatron
Buddha & Giselle

Also, some interesting Spearfish Lake characters whose stories don't necessarily have to stay in SL:
Wendy & Carole Carter
Judy Sorenson



>The "What's your thinking" thread has sure developed
>some thoughts -- and one new book so far. But it's
>gotten so complicated that new posts are hard to find,
>so let's start a new thread and abandon the old one.
>
>The question is as before: can anyone think of a minor
>character in some past story that seems interesting
>enough to have a story written around them?
>
>I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of
>the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's
>set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead
>characters -- Randy, Jennlynn, or the like.
>
>However, I'd be particularly interested in characters
>that aren't from Spearfish Lake -- in other words,
>Bradford stories, or others. I have a pretty good
>backlog of Spearfish Lake based stories, but am weaker
>on others. Let's hear some ideas!
>
>-- Wes
[> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Lew
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Date Posted: 16:40:08 05/02/12 Wed

>SNIP>

>Also, some interesting Spearfish Lake characters whose
>stories don't necessarily have to stay in SL:
>Wendy & Carole Carter
>Judy Sorenson



I'd say Judy (Niven) Sorenson was pretty well covered in "The Next Generation" as she overcame her Handicap and married Ken.

Lew
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Sam
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Date Posted: 17:19:02 05/04/12 Fri

Okay, one more interesting character: Kayla Holst, the running and reading daughter of Emily Holst of Bradford.

>I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of
>the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's
>set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Dang Fool
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Date Posted: 11:54:40 05/07/12 Mon

- Janine, employee at the Bradford Spee-D-Mart and later Courier. I imagined her a younger Emily that was content, but her desire to spread wings comes while at the Courier. She isn't Brenda. It isn't journalism that drives her to change.

- Someone from Disciplines of the Savior (other than the Swifts), especially someone younger than Jennlynn that receives a wake-up from her heroism and the subsequent reconciliation.

- Or maybe Barbara Bishop of WOXI learns her lesson. She's still young.

- Cory Luma, Jason Macrae's friend, after he dropped Wildlife Bio and got a girlfriend.

I imagine you want to connect Bradford, yet a younger crowd than the 1988 Grads. Some characters from Cattail in Wychbold would be possible, such as Marty, the mechanic, or the retired Burn's grandkids.
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Deadly Ernest
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Date Posted: 01:10:53 05/08/12 Tue

>The "What's your thinking" thread has sure developed
>some thoughts -- and one new book so far. But it's
>gotten so complicated that new posts are hard to find,
>so let's start a new thread and abandon the old one.
>
>The question is as before: can anyone think of a minor
>character in some past story that seems interesting
>enough to have a story written around them?
>
>I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of
>the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's
>set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead
>characters -- Randy, Jennlynn, or the like.
>
>However, I'd be particularly interested in characters
>that aren't from Spearfish Lake -- in other words,
>Bradford stories, or others. I have a pretty good
>backlog of Spearfish Lake based stories, but am weaker
>on others. Let's hear some ideas!
>
>-- Wes

G'day,

May I suggest Emily's daughter Kayla. You can develop her running at the same time as you develop her political awareness as started in Picking Up the Pieces. There's opportunity there to start with her in high school or college and involve her with the appropriate local politics while developing her running career.

Some drama can be added by having her become a leading Olympic running candidate and then an injury forces her out of running and deeper into politics.

Regards,

Ernest
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Skip
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Date Posted: 08:01:04 05/29/12 Tue

>The "What's your thinking" thread has sure developed
>some thoughts -- and one new book so far. But it's
>gotten so complicated that new posts are hard to find,
>so let's start a new thread and abandon the old one.
>
>The question is as before: can anyone think of a minor
>character in some past story that seems interesting
>enough to have a story written around them?
>
>I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of
>the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's
>set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead
>characters -- Randy, Jennlynn, or the like.
>
>However, I'd be particularly interested in characters
>that aren't from Spearfish Lake -- in other words,
>Bradford stories, or others. I have a pretty good
>backlog of Spearfish Lake based stories, but am weaker
>on others. Let's hear some ideas!
>
>-- Wes

How about Emily and Kevin and mayve Vicky and Jason meet Al, Karin and Crystal and takd a boat ride in the Canyon.
[> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Wes
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Date Posted: 08:38:04 05/29/12 Tue

>How about Emily and Kevin and mayve Vicky and Jason
>meet Al, Karin and Crystal and takd a boat ride in the
>Canyon.

Funny, I was just thinking about that. It had to have happened but I don't know about making a story out of it.
[> [> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Dmitri
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Date Posted: 10:26:29 05/29/12 Tue

>>How about Emily and Kevin and mayve Vicky and Jason
>>meet Al, Karin and Crystal and takd a boat ride in the
>>Canyon.
>
>Funny, I was just thinking about that. It had to have
>happened but I don't know about making a story out of
>it.

It would almost have to happen after Homestanders and Picking up the Pieces. That means the knife shop is in full swing. Can they all take off and leave it at the same time?
[> [> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Mike
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Date Posted: 21:28:58 06/08/12 Fri

>>How about Emily and Kevin and mayve Vicky and Jason
>>meet Al, Karin and Crystal and takd a boat ride in the
>>Canyon.
>
>Funny, I was just thinking about that. It had to have
>happened but I don't know about making a story out of
>it.


A story revolving around emily and kevin would be great as well as their daughter. Emily has played a great secondary character in most of the bradford stories but unlike any of the other characters has not had the limelight or main focus, niether has kevin, perhaps its their time ?
[> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Boyd Percy
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Date Posted: 22:19:38 05/30/12 Wed

>>The "What's your thinking" thread has sure developed
>>some thoughts -- and one new book so far. But it's
>>gotten so complicated that new posts are hard to find,
>>so let's start a new thread and abandon the old one.
>>
>>The question is as before: can anyone think of a minor
>>character in some past story that seems interesting
>>enough to have a story written around them?
>>
>>I'd really prefer if it was a character from one of
>>the newer stories, at least one of the stories that's
>>set on the more recent side, say, post-2000. No lead
>>characters -- Randy, Jennlynn, or the like.
>>
>>However, I'd be particularly interested in characters
>>that aren't from Spearfish Lake -- in other words,
>>Bradford stories, or others. I have a pretty good
>>backlog of Spearfish Lake based stories, but am weaker
>>on others. Let's hear some ideas!
>>
>>-- Wes
>
>How about Emily and Kevin and mayve Vicky and Jason
>meet Al, Karin and Crystal and takd a boat ride in the
>Canyon.

That's an interesting idea. I remember Noah was from southern Michigan, so it would be natural that he and Crystal and his in-laws might visit around Bradford. If any of the Bradford characters did take a Canyon trip, wouldn't they likely go with Duane and Michelle? Maybe the Canyon Tours people could meet up with Roger and Cattail, also.
[> [> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Wes
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Date Posted: 23:25:09 05/30/12 Wed

>That's an interesting idea. I remember Noah was from
>southern Michigan, so it would be natural that he and
>Crystal and his in-laws might visit around Bradford.
>If any of the Bradford characters did take a Canyon
>trip, wouldn't they likely go with Duane and Michelle?
>Maybe the Canyon Tours people could meet up with Roger
>and Cattail, also.

Alas, there are some timing issues involved with books not yet published that make these a little more complicated.

That's the problem with this thread, and the other one -- I've seen some good ideas go by that I've already addressed, or are rendered unlikely by events that have yet to be published.

But, don't give up!
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Hal
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Date Posted: 14:34:51 05/31/12 Thu

"Alas, there are some timing issues involved with books not yet published that make these a little more complicated.

That's the problem with this thread, and the other one -- I've seen some good ideas go by that I've already addressed, or are rendered unlikely by events that have yet to be published."

Wes, perhaps you could create some "rules" to steer us away from unfruitful ideas. Would be sort of a spoiler a bit, but not to bad I think.
[> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Leo
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Date Posted: 21:26:39 06/03/12 Sun

This isn't really a suggestion for an explicit tie-in to a particular existing character, but more of a "starting point" for a subject. I can see all sorts of different paths, depending on what existing character gets "picked," be it in the Canyon, or Bradford, or Spearfish Lake.

I work in a major tourist location, and we get zillions of people through all the time. (~5 million per year, plus or minus a million or so.) And every now and again, on a day that is otherwise no different from any other, something big and bad happens somewhere in the world.

It's not all worked out, and making the logic and logistics "work" might be tricky - particularly culturally, but to use an unfleshed out example:

Suppose you've got a Japanese student/tourist, on something of a holiday in North America on March 11, 2011. Who ends up completely orphaned, homeless, and otherwise more-or-less abandoned in a foreign country. How does s/he deal with it? The notion that floats with me is adopted/fostered by someone (a host family, perhaps?)

Culturally, I don't know how well that particular example would work. But how many husbands *and* wives got killed on 9/11? Or even that tornado in Joplin a year ago? (I "like" the foreign idea, because that makes it a whole lot more of a challenge, to me.)

And it always seems (to me) that after the initial rush of shock and horror, "what happens to the orphans?" Nobody ever really seems to talk about it after the initial rush.

(Come to think on it, it's rare to hear any more mention of Japan's quake except the whole fallout (excuse the pun) of the nuclear meltdowns, when realistically, that was practically non-existent when compared to the magnitude of the rest of the disaster.)

Leo
[> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Hal
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Date Posted: 22:41:50 06/09/12 Sat

Leo, the time scale will be entirely different, but I think the fallout and the nuclear meltdowns will be a lot more significant in the long run.
[> [> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Leo
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Date Posted: 06:04:21 06/11/12 Mon

But to a "survivor," the fallout begins the instant that they hear about it. And, locally -- to the person -- the impact is far more direct and significant.
[> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
K Pelle
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Date Posted: 09:18:39 06/11/12 Mon

I like your idea, but I would think a natural choice of characters and setting would be a person rescued from the ravages of Katrina, who was moved to somewhere like Texas.

KP
[> [> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Leo
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Date Posted: 18:09:16 06/17/12 Sun

Well, as I said, the quake/tsunami of Japan was what made me think about it, walking the streets of DC and seeing the tour-groups of foreigners.

But sadly, there are large scale disasters all over the place and time: Joplin, Haiti, major quakes in Iran and Turkey, monsoons in India...

...and even 'small' and 'minor' disasters to those involved; even if it's just one or two people in a car accident, for an orphan left behind? I'd think it's pretty disastrous.
[> [> [> [> Subject: Re: Son of "What's your Thinking?


Author:
Deadly Ernest
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Date Posted: 21:08:34 06/17/12 Sun

>Well, as I said, the quake/tsunami of Japan was what
>made me think about it, walking the streets of DC and
>seeing the tour-groups of foreigners.
>
>But sadly, there are large scale disasters all over
>the place and time: Joplin, Haiti, major quakes in
>Iran and Turkey, monsoons in India...
>
>...and even 'small' and 'minor' disasters to those
>involved; even if it's just one or two people in a car
>accident, for an orphan left behind? I'd think it's
>pretty disastrous.

G'day

It's not that hard to do, one of the minor characters in my story Finding Home (posted in Oct 2010) at SOL has her back story come out fairly early. We meet her a couple of years after the event as a 16 year old, and her Uncle tells us she was in the hair dressers getting her hair done and was doing as told, waiting for her mother to come back and collect her after shopping. Some hours later one of the staff is worried she's still sitting around and makes some enquiries - whole family killed when a walkway collapses at a local mall and the police have to take her into care while the find her nearest relative.

It's a sort of cameo role she has for a little while, but is shows what can happen and how people just sit around until the news finds them.

Regards,

Ernest


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