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Subject: Blue Beauty - Chap 10


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Johnson
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Date Posted: 19:08:36 06/29/09 Mon

Even though most of this forum has been used for taking tangents from your stories, I wanted to take the opportunity to make this comment a bit more public.

This chapter gave me absolute anticipatory chills as it became clear that you were going to bring so many of your important characters all together at B&G's. The past story lines have been enjoyable on their own but having them all come together like this is absolutely delightful.

The pacing was no more rushed than desired and was just slow enough to have it all be realistic and to make clear what was happening. You knew what you were doing but took the time to make it work properly for the reader. Thank you for not letting your desire to get it done overcome your need to do it right. I am truly looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

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