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Date Posted: 17:46:04 09/23/06 Sat
Author: Susie
Subject: Re: Perfect Love
In reply to: Timelessheart 's message, "Perfect Love" on 01:15:36 09/22/06 Fri

I think this would be better if you could harness the emotions into some kind of structure and stanzas and use perhaps metaphors to develop the thoughts

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