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Subject: Written At Age 9

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Date Posted: 19:08:35 06/11/03 Wed

God when are you coming
Ive been waiting for so long
God are you listening, or did I do something wrong
God why do you hate me, because of bad things that I have done
I know there are lots of children and that I am only one.
But if you come and take me, anything I will do
If only you will, make this one wish for me come true.

I want to stay with you in heaven
Be an angel in your sky
I want feathers or some wings
And I promise not to ever cry

I will make you very proud
The best angel I will be
I will be good and not cause no trouble
If you will just come for me.

Im sorry that I want to go
But I know that you are love
My brother says where you live, is beautiful,
Not in the clouds but high above

God I hope you like my poem
And that from there, that you can read
I'll follow you most anywhere
In you I do believe

So god when are you coming
What do I have to do?
I don't know how to do it
So I sit and wait for you.

I thought that I would
Jump out
Just like a bird that can fly
But I just cant seem to do it
Cause that would hurt ,
And what if I don't die?

I think I will wait for you at least another day
And hope its my turn soon
To come and take me away.

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Re: Written At Age 9 Myth 19:24:43 06/17/03 Tue

Re: Written At Age 9 -- poet, 00:14:14 06/21/03 Sat

Re: Written At Age 9 Nightslick 00:02:50 06/18/03 Wed

Re: Written At Age 9 -- Poet, 00:15:47 06/21/03 Sat

Re: Written At Age 9 hiryuu 15:41:12 01/14/04 Wed

Re: Written At Age 9 hiryuu 15:42:24 01/14/04 Wed

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>God when are you coming >Ive been waiting for so long >God are you listening, or did I do something wrong >God why do you hate me, because of bad things that I >have done >I know there are lots of children and that I am only >one. >But if you come and take me, anything I will do >If only you will, make this one wish for me come true. > >I want to stay with you in heaven >Be an angel in your sky >I want feathers or some wings >And I promise not to ever cry > >I will make you very proud >The best angel I will be >I will be good and not cause no trouble >If you will just come for me. > >Im sorry that I want to go >But I know that you are love >My brother says where you live, is beautiful, >Not in the clouds but high above > >God I hope you like my poem >And that from there, that you can read >I'll follow you most anywhere >In you I do believe > >So god when are you coming >What do I have to do? >I don't know how to do it >So I sit and wait for you. > >I thought that I would >Jump out >Just like a bird that can fly >But I just cant seem to do it >Cause that would hurt , >And what if I don't die? > >I think I will wait for you at least another day >And hope its my turn soon >To come and take me away.
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