just testing a part of my story.... ingore my foolishness.... -- OOC

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Date Posted: 14:49:25 09/17/02 Tue
Author: ingore me... I'm a bad story writer...
Subject: just testing a part of my story.... ingore my foolishness....

before I start I need to send a important message...."SKYFOX! CALL ME PLEASE! (you have to call me because I have no sense of time and will forget to call you.) ok...here I go.... you people can ingore the rest of this post... please do because this is very sad...

Light hits the water as it turns red with blood. Cruel laughter erupts into the silent morning, as the body is washed by the cool gentle stream. Silent was the new day, like the silent death. As the untouched land begins to arise, terror strikes the heart of every living soul. Fear had been released into this hidden land.
A child, so tender, so innocent, cried and mourned for the soul of the body that layed cold in the stream. Lifting the unicorn's head into her lap, the child stroked the face, as her tears spilled onto it. Her vision blurred, she thought of the Queen's last words to her, "Wakara... save our land... rule it...stop my sister... hurry Wakara... hurry... no...don't cry.. Princess Wakara... tears are not for here...." with that request Queen StarDream faded from this world.
Wakara wiped her tears away, but they keep coming...she couldn't stop crying... Lowering the Queeen's head gently, she walked into the forest, walking faster and faster, untill she was running. She didn't know where she was running to... she just knew she want to get away as far as possible. Her heart raced, pounding in her ears as she ran. A summer shower started, playing a lullaby of raindrops against the trees. ~Faster, Faster, farther, farther~, thought the frightened child. She wanted to leave this world and go back to earth... ~yes... its safe there... I can leave and go home.~ Her tears mixed with the rain. it seemed to be raining harder now. Running out of breath, she slowed to a stop and fell to the ground. Wakara hugged her knees tightly to her chest, feeling like her heart was going to pound right out of her chest. Tired, wet, and frightened, the child fainted into blackness, it pulled her down, deep into a black hole, she fought, but found herself helpless...

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yuck.... I messed up big time on this one! eeerrrr..... I'll never get it right! (NT) -- ingore me, 12:38:21 09/18/02 Wed
- hey now mysterious figure.... -- skyfox, 15:19:18 09/18/02 Wed
  - *claps* -- Musha, 23:10:17 09/18/02 Wed
    - ummm... -- Dream- I mean... ingore me..., 12:57:31 09/19/02 Thu
      - Hmmm... yes...>> -- Vulc, 23:08:55 09/19/02 Thu
        groans -- ......, 11:20:08 09/20/02 Fri
        *grins* I'm 15, too! Welcome to the club! ^^ -- Vulc, 16:21:54 09/20/02 Fri
        you're 15 too!? I never would have guessed. -- ........, 16:48:02 09/20/02 Fri
        me neither i just stop in the middle... -- Eliza, 16:59:24 09/20/02 Fri
        I like poetry too... I wrote alot poems... all of them stink... (NT) -- ......., 17:17:19 09/20/02 Fri
        mine stink too (NT) -- Eliza, 17:40:07 09/20/02 Fri
        not the one you posted! it was good! (NT) -- ......., 18:29:11 09/20/02 Fri
        thank u player of dreamfire (it is u, right? LOL) -- Eliza, 18:37:51 09/20/02 Fri
        *shocked and looks around* dreamfire!?... um...er.... (NT) -- ......., 10:08:49 09/21/02 Sat
        LOL (NT) -- Eliza, 10:09:23 09/21/02 Sat
        I once wrote a short story in the middle of my maths book! -- Vulc, 01:38:56 09/21/02 Sat
        I LOVE hearing stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :p -- skyfox, 06:04:14 09/21/02 Sat
        *nods* yes! please do! (NT) -- ......., 10:09:51 09/21/02 Sat
        *shrugs* Ok... I'll dig it up (hopefully) tomorrow -- Vulc, 03:19:40 09/22/02 Sun