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Date Posted: 17:15:31 01/14/01 Sun
Author: 4C 黎靖雯
Subject: 我記得……最愛的人




  今夜的天空很美,星星佈滿天上各處,「這邊的是射手座,那邊的是天秤座。」我記得與她在這大片草地上,是她教我看星的。現在夜空有多美,星兒有多耀目,晚風有多涼快,都只不過是我獨個兒欣賞、享受。這片草地不只是我們看星的地方,也是我們留下快樂的地方。在這堙A我們拾著不美麗但奇特的石頭、找尋著草猛的行蹤、看著蟻兒們「工作」、欣賞著有生命的花草。她說過:所有東西都有生命,即使是一草一木,我們都要珍惜。這句話已留在我的心坎中,使我永遠記著。現在我閒時都在這片草地上漫步,細味這些回憶。
  在她身上我學會了很多東西。我記得她不曾給我聽流行曲,卻喜歡拿著盛水的杯子、沒有水的杯子和筷子,往杯子上一敲,發出清脆的響聲。我們就是這樣敲,便敲出了一首歌來。記得她教我踏自行車,我失敗了很多次,很想放棄,但她在我身旁陪伴著我,她說過:我們做每一件事情都要有始有終,不可中途放棄;跌倒了,再起身,總會成功。就是她這句話,我學會了踏自行車,而且成為我成的座右銘。
  我長大了,思想成熟了,但我並沒有忘記她帶給我的快樂,帶給我的道理、教誨,使我今天做了一個開朗、處事認真的人。我覺得她仍舊在我身旁默默守護著,而我相信我們會在天國重遇。
  她是我最愛的人──母親。


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直抒胸臆本無不可,感情外露則不耐讀。作者宜過濾感情,頓筆推敲,方始構思。

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