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Subject: Jeremy Author: Heath [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 19:27:03 12/06/01 Thu Wow...I read both versions and I'm having a difficult time trying to decide which one is better...they BOTH told the story very effectively. My vote would have to go to version one of "Jeremy". I'm in agreement with most of the people here about version one...it has the best sense of flow to it of the two. However, I also liked seeing the added italic dialogue of Kyle in version two. (but then, I guess I always have been somewhat of a closeted "drama queen"! ;-)) As I write this, I'm still blown away by the scene that was described in the story. You can't help but reflect upon your own junior-high and high school existence and compare notes, if you will. I want to think that I wouldn't have been as explosive as Jeremy was if I had to endure what he did...but I hope I never EVER have to find out. Dwayne, you did a fantastic job on this story...I hope it was as theraputic for you to write it as it will be for a lot of people who will read it. Congratulations! **hugs** - Heath P.S. Give Brian and Pete my love...hope to see them again soon! :-) [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]