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Subject: Jeremy Author: Phil Patricks [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 18:32:02 01/21/02 Mon Wow! what a story! Both versions were good. Though I would have utilized a slightly different format for visual reasons, I felt that version 2 kept the Kyle character involved in the story in greater depth. Version 1 had a higher continuity of the story, so it depends on which way you'd want to stress it, whether it's Paul's 3rd person, or Kyle's 1st person. Both are powerful. It is a real tragedy to know that this type of harrassment continues to this day. May the day come that this story become the only way to know about the senseless violence. Phil [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]