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Date Posted: 00:17:25 05/22/01 Tue
Author: Deadpoet
Subject: Check it out
In reply to: chelle 's message, "untitled... sorta crappy... needs help" on 21:11:08 05/21/01 Mon

I just got home from work and my mind is still spinning through the skematics that I looked at for the last 7hrs, but this is what I came up with. The begening of your work set the imagery base that I used to work out the rest of the poem. It was great work you did not crappy, keep trying it will come to you.

Best Regards,
Deadpoet

I could sink into your arms
Like the earth into its shadow
Keeping me from harm
I dream of us running through a colorful meadow

I’d love you
With every ounce of passion
So close, like the grass covered in morning dew
Believe in me, my heart has learned many lessons

I will not deny
The love that dwells in my small figure
I await for your reply
Amongst the night I linger

Making wishes on the tails of shooting stars
Remembering the way your hands spoke to my essence
I tear trickles from my eye, looking through my bars
Of love that I found in your mysterious presence

Basking in the warm summer nights
I slowly trickle back with resistance
Bathing in the rising light
Breaking back into existence,

Wishing to find….
Gentle dreams of you whisk through my mind
This moment of reality is unkind
I realize that I have to break the bind

Yet

The stars are silent
The thunder of my heart, so defiant
The fulguration is like a giant
But I must deny it

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  • Re: untitled... sorta crappy... needs help -- Rafaél, 10:58:36 05/22/01 Tue
  • Re: untitled... sorta crappy... needs help -- Deadpoet, 22:36:43 05/22/01 Tue
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