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Date Posted: 01:05:18 05/05/01 Sat
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: Daydreams of Nightthings
In reply to: Paris Lovecraft 's message, "Daydreams of Nightthings" on 14:21:21 05/04/01 Fri

well Paris, hello
Good piece overall but I've come to expect a higher level of professionalism from you; sorry - you set yourself up for it with past masterpieces.
Ok, in English: there are parts of this that read sloppily and I KNOW you can clean it up, make it all neat and tidy and better.

just my thoughts, it's been a horrid day overall so if this sounds harsh, sorry :)

Leisa*)

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