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Date Posted: 23:12:59 04/14/01 Sat
Author: spw
Subject: Re: Go
In reply to: Rafaél 's message, "Go" on 12:48:42 04/14/01 Sat

Oh Rafael....WOW and wow!

"...As intuition gnaws, into wide vast empty space
nothing I can do, to quell this underlying mood"

This feeling was part of my "baby blue walking nightmare"
Now as I joyfuly celebrate my first year of poem writing,
or is was it '99?;-p-[, I'm getting closer to writing
about that "b.b.w.n.". And this, just somewhat at the
start of your poem!!! And then this which I understand
and then don't quite...
"...Scary at times, when another mind runs parallel
I think of a word and it rolls right off the tongue
of someone I’d really rather not, reveal my aims..."

and then you wrap up "Go" with this...

"...while my finger forms one word upon the glass."


even though I wish it could be love,
I must assume the word was "Go"...ah,
done so well to have my heart aches for both,
of your poem!!!
Superbly done and of that one verse, well I must read
again and again, for all time...smile...thanks...Susanne

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