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Date Posted: 03:29:25 11/18/00 Sat
Author: Anna
Subject: Re: The Picture (Opinions Please) (tried my hand at a short story)
In reply to: Leisa*) 's message, "Re: The Picture (Opinions Please) (tried my hand at a short story)" on 17:08:30 11/16/00 Thu

Leisa,

Thank you so much for commenting, a great big help you are.
I agree with what you said. The more I read it the weaker it seems, not just that one part. I feel like the whole thing needs more emotion, I'm not sure. Thanks for all the great advice. I value your opinion very much. Your a very good writer. Hope your feeling better soon. God bless you.

Anna : )

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