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Date Posted: 09:12:15 02/25/03 Tue
Author: 山中一條草
Subject: Re: 珫璃碎片 2003/01/22
In reply to: Bossa Nesta 's message, "珫璃碎片 2003/01/22" on 04:02:39 02/24/03 Mon

換作是我會那樣寫 (見下@ ) , 一點意見, 莫怪.

>珫璃碎片 2003/01/22
>
>我走過和妳走過的路
>把玩和妳玩過的玩意
>一幕幕片段像影片般掠過......(可否形容片段如何美麗難忘)
>紅的......
>白的......
>粉藍色的......
>
>一幕黑色的
>從橫中把它們打散
>所有片段化作了珫璃碎片
>小小的珫璃碎片
>刺向我心 (@: 刺破了.....的時空 / 刺中我的腦神經)
>也射向妳身邊的人
>
>我拾起碎片
>忍著痛(@ : 不如具體說 "手在滴血")
>舉起
>讓陰天的陽光把它們閃耀
>讓幻彩灑向眾人

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