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Date Posted: 11:57:04 02/27/03 Thu
Author: Bossa Nesta
Subject: thx for suggesting. but..
In reply to: Bossa Nesta 's message, "珫璃碎片 2003/01/22" on 04:02:39 02/24/03 Mon

thank you all for suggesting.. maybe i will use some of your idea ah...

but.. i think what i write because what i've read. input => output..
so, i'll keep this poem as it was. but i promise u that i will learn from you, every one of you. ^_^

thx, again

>珫璃碎片 2003/01/22
>
>我走過和妳走過的路
>把玩和妳玩過的玩意
>一幕幕片段像影片般掠過......
>紅的......
>白的......
>粉藍色的......
>
>一幕黑色的
>從橫中把它們打散
>所有片段化作了珫璃碎片
>小小的珫璃碎片
>刺向我心
>也射向妳身邊的人
>
>我拾起碎片
>忍著痛
>舉起
>讓陰天的陽光把它們閃耀
>讓幻彩灑向眾人

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