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Date Posted: 07:10:24 10/13/02 Sun
Author: 君臨
Subject: 淺論李天命的詩集《寒武紀》

淺論李天命的詩集《寒武紀》

由於李天命將《寒武紀》列入「哲道十四闋」之一(詳見李天命新著《從思考到思考之上》),頗為自負,故此我以下的評論是頗為嚴苛的。
我認為《寒武紀》是李天命最差的出版物了,以新詩角度看,其中有一半詩作皆屬平庸之作,包括《祭母》等一系列超短詩,甚至臨界劣作之評。李天命將《寒武紀》列入「哲道十四闋」之一,我感到詫異,因為這批詩作的主題散亂不堪,五分三作品跟「哲道」拉不上關係,五分一作品只是描述哲學現象而無犀利思想的展示,還剩五分一作品在玩文字遊戲,甚至連中學時代的未戒奶作品也奉上了,一向以嚴謹著書著稱的李天命,不知有否後悔推出《寒武紀》?
李天命認為一個人可以同時擁有高度的理性和高度的感性,所以他一邊講語理分析,一邊寫詩,以作示範。我的確欣賞李天命的哲學修為,但他的詩,我認為不好。《寒武紀》中,幾乎有半數的詩作在玩弄形式,之外,又有一部分詩作在寫宇宙的狀態,反而,李天命不能手寫我心,借詩去展示個人的思想,這讓我看到李天命寫的詩並非真實的創作,而是「苦心經營」下的產物。更不幸的是,李天命為了追求感性的表現,又「苦心經營」了不少純抒情的作品,而想不到多年後萌生「哲道十四闋」的設想,突兀地將這本雜亂無章而且毫無哲道創見的《寒武紀》也收了進去,這令李天命人生整個嚴謹的哲道架構暴露出「短樁」。
李天命不再寫詩了,不再出版詩集了,因為他寫不下去。
最後抄他一首代表作作結:

《運動》

躍起之後
勢須下落

而今問題在
你如何去平伏那心跳

我堅決認為,這不是詩。

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